I just got Gone World edited and updated. My, my, what many mistakes I left in that one, I really wonder how it sold so many copies. From now on any new e-book I will have (professionally) edited before publishing.
Excerpt Gone World:
GONE
WORLD
BY
A.ROSARIA
ESCAPE
“Nick.”
His
name rang in his pounding head. His head hurt where the stone had hit
him, or was it shrapnel? No, not shrapnel. He didn't smell the blood
that it would cause.
“Nick.”
A
shove against his shoulder lulled his head sideways, igniting the
pang to a new high. He squinted his closed eyes as if he could press
out the pain.
“Get
up. We need to move,” Tina said. It was indeed her, and somehow she
had survived.
He
opened his eyes to a bright light. Daylight
already,
he thought. As quickly the light blinded him it swept away, leaving
him in darkness. Far away he heard the hum of an engine. They were searching for stragglers—him,
Tina and whoever else had survived. Not that it mattered anymore.
“We
need to move away from here fast,” Tina said.
“You
think!” he said, coughing dust. It tasted bitter, dry, and surely
not edible. Give it a few more weeks and it might. He spat the last
bit out, leaving his throat dry and wanting water that he didn't
have. If they didn't catch and kill him, the dust would; he had
gotten enough in him to guarantee him cancer in a decade or two. He
smiled. Although,
the lack of water might get me first.
“Stop
acting like a fool,” Tina said. “We have to leave now.”
He
winked the darkness out of his eyes and saw her haggard, brown face
swim into his vision with her big eyes too innocent looking to belong
to her.
“Where
are your buddy Arnoldo and that crazy, Ron?”
Her
look soured. “He’s not my buddy, and dead, both of them. We
really can't stay.”
Tina's
eyes darted around, while sweat mixed with blood ran down her face.
It wasn’t her blood. She had no scratches or other visible
injuries. She had lucked out again; her luck had no end.
“Why
run? Eventually they'll get us.”
Frantically
she shook her head, her filthy hair slugging along with the motion,
spattering blood in his face.
“Just
leave me be. Really, what do you care if I live or die?”
Tina
sighed, stood up, and kicked his side. “Fine,” she said with her
teeth clenched. “Die then, asshole.”
That
was the most emotion he had ever seen from her. However, she still
was a bitch to kick him. It hurt like hell. The damn woman could kick
with the best of them. She still stood there, not leaving. The hum of
the engine drew closer. She had better move soon before the light
comes sweeping in.
“What
are you waiting for? Go. Don’t wait around to die with me.”
She
didn't answer. Instead, she stayed frozen, watching whatever she saw
through the big hole in the wall.
“Tina.”
Nick stood up. “Let’s go, then.”
“Asshole,”
she hissed between her teeth. She ducked away, grabbing his hand and
pulling him down with her. His knees banged on the rubble floor; it
was a good thing he had on knee pads, or else he would be hurting
now.
“What
the—”
She
punched him before he could finish and raised her index finger to her
puckered lips. A beam of light passed over their heads. The vehicle
stopped near their hiding place: three walls left standing, filled
with bullet holes, covered by a sagging, charred roof. It had once
been home to a family now long dead.
The
floor trembled lightly along with the stationary vehicle. The heat
emanating from the engine already reached them. It was the only
comfort brought to them by this uninvited guest, who surely was
bringing the gift of death.
The
sound of boots hitting the ground was followed by the soldiers’
voices. They were Russians, not Chinese, and there went their
advantage of size. Nick wiped blood from his lips, glowering at Tina.
He hoped she showed this sort of kindness to them. He unsheathed his
trusty, rusty butcher knife and knelt next to her, who was
brandishing her own knife. Hers was bigger than his.
Their
eyes met, and the right side of her mouth shifted up in a smirk he
would have loved to slap from her face. She tapped her right ear and
raised three fingers. Fine hearing. He had only heard two. The sound
of crushing stones under boots came from the side wall as someone
tried to slip around the house. There was no hiding or fleeing
anymore; the choice to action had been made for them.
Tina
moved lithe on her feet, leaving him behind to stare at her wiggling
rear. Great,
he thought. She had left him with two to take care of. Way to go. If
he had stayed down, his death would have come quick enough. He shook
his head. That was not be the way he wanted to go; fighting suited
him better. He watched her creep along the side wall, brushing her
right shoulder against the stones. The sound was inaudible over the
hum of the engine. Her combat knife was clutched in her left hand.
She'd manage by herself; it wasn't her first time, or his.
Nick
gritted his teeth, hugged the wall, and slid towards the big gap made
by a tank shell during the war. He waited for a rustle or grunt, and
it came as if on cue, barely audible unless you specifically listened
for it.
He
rose up, ignoring his stiff, aching muscles and his throbbing
headache. Already the feeling of pain was numbed by the rush of
adrenaline coursing through his body. He climbed out of the hole and
moved to the other side as if it was a common daily occurrence. It
took him a second to take it all in. There was rubble everywhere and
a sea of gray in the moonlight as if they were on said moon itself.
A
Vodnik was parked about ten feet away; it was a Russian-made
multipurpose vehicle with an open turret hatch, but instead of a
machine gun, it had a powerful searchlight mounted on top. The light
pointed away from the house and luckily was not manned. Two tall
Russian soldiers in camouflaged fatigues and body armor stood with
their backs turned to him, their rifles pointed at the ground.
He
approached them quickly without bothering being silent. With long
strides he was upon the tallest. He grabbed him by his hair, which
the fool had allowed to grow. It was his doom and Nick's luck. He
pulled the soldier's head back and pushed the point of his rusted,
nicked, but sharp-enough knife into the jugular and out the other
side. He forced the knife outward, tearing the front of the man's
throat open. Choking on his own blood, the soldier collapsed.
....
.jpg)
